Everything’s gonna be alright!

images (1) This Sunday is special – she is taking them out for lunch at a popular restaurant. Yesterday she had received her 1st salary. The realization & the satisfaction it brings along, that she has a job now after her last few months of struggle makes it more special. Life can get difficult at times but she managed to face it with a brave face & today she is smiling back at life. She realized that she can now help her father by sharing his responsibility of her little brother’s education. She could see his pride & happiness when she tried to handover her 1st salary to him. He refused to take it & only put his hands over her head & smiled. And that smile of his said it all. And she hoped that, her Mom, too, is feeling happy & proud of her, watching from the heavens above.

I am taking part in Write Tribe Festival of Words & this piece of fiction is written for today’s prompt – 9 sentence fiction. writetribe_festival_words_3-300x200


  1. One of the happiest moments of life is getting your first pay-check and feeling finally independent and being able to bear the expenses of the family.

  2. That was so heartwarming πŸ™‚
    made me smile..
    I’m glad she was able to contribute to her family’s needs πŸ™‚

  3. Wonderful portrayal of a LIFE in just 9 sentences..Its indeed the greatest satisfaction and pleasure when we can be the reason behind our parent’s smile..I would love to add that some wonderful Friends really help us to be strong and believe in ourselves..

  4. So much of love in this one. There’s great happiness in earning and sharing the financial and other responsibilities of the family πŸ™‚ Well written, dreamzandclouds πŸ™‚

  5. A feeling of achievement and lovely people around is a kind of blessing….she’s definitely going to be a responsible person in any field of life…..a cute little story….

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